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I suggest slightly changing the wording of the last sentence. We do not know how long the company will continue to manufacture the product, and it is possible the Milestone plaque will persist longer. Instead of saying it is still manufacturing, we should give a parameter. For example, "When IEEE dedicated this plaque" or "X number of years after introduction..."

Allisonmarsh01:09, 14 August 2013